well i have my APWH exam tomorrow. for those who don't know, this exam will decided whether or not i wasted the last 2 years of my life taking an APWH course or if i get college credit. Thankfully i am not spassing out, all day today i was carrying around a paper that said _hours and _ min till the APWH exam...a lot of people yelled at me lol.
I actually cant wait, its going to be fun.
on another note, i am writing a poem, with the help of a friend. I like it so far but still want to add more to it, i think it is the best thing i have written yet, even if i did have help. so if anyone would like to read the most recent copy here it is, if not, than whatever:
Human
Evil, decrepit, mortal beings
Constantly wishing to be immortal
An elixir of life that cannot be
Obtained by human hands
None have received this great potion
Though they all thought others had
They would say that they deserve it
For the work they had actually put off
Over this, war would be waged,
though there was no reward to be won
When their fighting finally breaks
To their secret pleasures they must return
Until death does steal from them all they have
They shall take all that they can touch
They will get bored of those things dearest to them
Then abandon and move on to others
Through the darkness and through the light
the human race walks on
Mother Earth cannot hold on
were it up to them, she wouldn't last much longer
well, that was it, i think its easy to tell what was by me and what by my friend by the difference in writing stile, and i want to put more work into it, rewording some verses and adding completely new ones, but i really like the ending 4 lines(only the last 1 was mine but oh well) If you have any feedback I would appreciate it, completely bash it if you like, i guess that would give me ideas on how to make it better.
anyway, i had those first 2 lines stuck in my head for like a week before writing it down and after that i just continued with help, if you cant tell it is about how awful the human race is.
If you have read all this, thank you. adios!
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